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The wind picked up outside the window, and the residual leaves of the tall paulownia trees rustled.

I have been doing nucleic acid for 9 consecutive days, and I am currently in a state of stalemate, fighting when the enemy is tired.

The friends reminded that the virus is invisible and intangible, so self-protection should be done well, keep two points and one line, and wear a mask.

I maintain a clean work route, a normal study order, and don't give the enemy a chance.

I heard today that Teacher Li Qian answered a question that I also wanted to ask, how to write more vividly, express concisely, read comfortably, and be interesting.

Teacher Qian’s answer is that spoken language should be written instead of written.It means that it should not only have the concise and accurate advantages of written language, but also have the characteristics of short sentences and simple structure in spoken language.

1. To achieve simplicity depends on deletion and modification.Willing to delete, lengthy sentences, irrelevant adjectives, as long as it does not affect the expression, delete them.Want dry goods, don't be too much foreshadowing.In the non-fiction book I read last time, many authors were very willing to delete and modify it. There are those who have moved the universe, which is equivalent to rewriting.

2. Accuracy is mainly achieved by nouns and verbs.I recently listened to Lao She's "Two Horses" in the study of Qiangguo. It tells the story of Lao Ma (Ma Zeren) and Xiao Ma (Ma Wei) who went to London to inherit the family business and lived in rent at Mrs. Wendu's house.Conflicts of ideas occurred, and there were some cultural prejudices. The characters created by Mr. Lao She are very vivid, with delicate brushstrokes, and it sounds like seeing what happened to Erma and his son.

3. It is comfortable to read, but it is actually written in the structure of spoken language.Make the sentences shorter and the structure simpler.Don't make negative negative positive, write positive directly.The mobile phone era itself requires short paragraphs, and text without paragraphs cannot be swallowed.

4. To be moving, the best way is to be less abstract, less lyrical, and give more details and stories.Xu Ling, who gets the headlines, often disassembles high-tech in a very simple and easy-to-understand way, such as lithography technology, wafers, and Moore's Law. She can use professional vocabulary and explain plainly. She is definitely a master of knowledge services.

When I was having dinner, I took a small piece of sweet potato, which was brought by the second sister of my hometown "chaotic (luan two sounds) sweet potato".

Why is it called "sweet potatoes in disorder", that is, after the landlord has planed the sweet potatoes, he picks up the leaks with his head, and it can be regarded as returning the particles to the warehouse!

Well, she is not big and sweet.

Hehe!Practice!

Today's evening glow

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